A GREAT PREMISE AND VISUAL QUALITY ANNIHILATED BY TERRIBLE STORYTELLING AND CHARACTERS

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MAJOR SPOILERS HIDDEN

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STORY

The story starts well with a very interesting premise of the rebellion of a faction of the Moon people against the Earth, specifically Sapientia, an AI responsible for improving every aspect of the life of the Earthlings in recent years but at the expense of the life of the Lunarians.
The premise and the first episodes trace the beginning of a political war plot between these 2 factions but too soon, although still sufficient, the general story veers towards the classic space battle shonen, SPOILER

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with the common monstrous enemy that threatens the end of the world.

But the critical point of Moonrise is not so much in this partially disappointing change of direction but rather in the terrible way of telling it. From the first episodes, although with potential, a strange management of the timelines is noted: flashbacks, flashforwards, timeskips, jumps back and forth are too pressing, disconnected and that ruin both the immersion and the initial characterization of the characters. If this situation of time jumps noticeable from the beginning remains a "secondary" flaw until halfway through the series (because the plot has potential, there will be time to stabilize things etc.), from a certain point onwards the narration takes a really bad turn. Too many elements to explain begin to be added, too many characters are not yet well defined, too many plot twists that prove useless in the long run but above all the number of episodes available in which to explain these things begins to decrease. In the first half, although limping, the story is interesting enough to involve the viewer in asking questions and theories, but the excessive "wanting to bite off more than one can chew" progressively removes any emotional involvement until it becomes a series of "I watch and hope that at a certain time someone will explain something". Too much time wasted on useless concepts, and too little time given to well delineating the cornerstones of the story such as Sapientia and the SEEDs, which are almost never talked about despite their key role because the focus must be: kidnapping the strong character, helping and saving friends, stopping deaths etc.
The series ends with an incalculable amount of unanswered questions, which in a Sci-Fi weigh even more, an ending without head or tail for most of the characters but above all the feeling that the authors wanted to do something that they are not capable of doing.
________ CHARACTERS The characters suffer from the terrible storytelling perhaps even more than the actual story. In the first half they do not seem very characterized and remain in stereotypes but they give an idea of ​​a cohesive group (talking about those of the team) and secondary characters at least sympathetic. When chaos takes hold however they also fall into confusion, strange interactions, relationships difficult to understand. As said above, they ignore the key topics of the story such as Sapientia, including the villains, and this leads to never having clear their objectives and to empty their actions of meaning.
The relationship between Rhys and Jacob is one of the critical points of the series. Their relationship is in constant oscillation between love and hate, especially because of Jacob's incomprehensible actions, and this leads Rhys to often be inconsistent, hateful and impossible to frame.
A significant interaction of the problems of the series is in the early stages between Zowan and Georg. SPOILER:

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In the 3rd episode Georg leaves some money to a homeless man, irritating Zowan as if to say that he shouldn't be full of himself of being rich. Zowan then runs away in rage which results in Eric's subsequent death while going to look for her. After the incident Georg and Zowan meet to clear things up but the conversation that would probably have highlighted Zowan's problems regarding the matter is entirely cut and in a short time they all go back to being friends. Result? The argument seems without context and the whole situation seems to be ridiculed in a "Eric died chasing a person angry because a friend gave money to a homeless man", in short, bullshit.

Even the villains suffer from very little uniqueness and some of them like Wyse Crown you don't even understand what they're doing there.

Many plot twists related to the characters are weak because no information is ever given about them and it's difficult to empathize with them.
___________ ANIMATION AND MUSIC Qualitatively the series does not disappoint and presents 18 solid episodes but above all very consistent in terms of animation. The fights are dynamic and intense. The excellent success of the action aspect also comes from a satisfying musical management, with Sci-Fi music very in theme and that elevates the key moments of action with emotion. The art direction is also of excellent quality, which is very important in a space setting.
The CGI is of an excellent level for Wit's standards and is never distracting or annoying to watch.
Excellent how it does not fall into the error of "overanimating" the 1st episode and then going downhill, you can see that it had an orderly and well-made production. The highlight is definitely Yasuyuki Ebara's episode 10, and I believe it is his first role as ED in his career (apart from episode 3 of the same series). Chapeau
▶ Video _____________ CONCLUSIONS AND QUESTIONS In closing, Moonrise certainly starts with a great premise but the serious writing flaws affect the developments and characters too heavily, leaving a sense of incompleteness in many elements and the feeling that, managed in a different way, it would have been a story that would have had its say, maybe not to be a pillar of animation but still an enjoyable series. I leave here at the bottom a series of questions and plot points not explained (or that I missed, in which case I invite you to DM me to report the mistakes)
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1. What exactly is the role of the General. We know that he is part of the Moon Chains, but since when? Recently? For some time? Was he already a spy before he even became General?

2. We know that SEED1 was born for space exploration, and SEED2 as its replacement. But what purpose would all the other SEEDs have? Why did Sapientia develop a deadly jellyfish?

3. Why is Mary the core of the jellyfish? They don't tell us that she was developed in a laboratory so she's a normal human. But did she acquire this power? Was she born with it? If she acquired it (perhaps from a jellyfish in episode 7-8) why her and not the others?

4. Why is Mary's presence so necessary to control the jellyfish if Jacob is the SEED capable of amplifying and blocking the other SEEDs? Was he not a good fit when writing the script? Was another character needed? Question 5 follows

5. Why is it that if Jacob has this power, is the protagonist and we have his POV for almost the entire series, it seems like the entire story revolves around Mary?

6. Why is SEED3 in a hidden cave who knows where and Rhys seems to be the only one who knows of its existence and location in the entire Earth army?

7. Why is it that if Sapientia has developed all the SEEDs or knows practically everything about everyone, it gets fooled like an idiot by Phil who introduces the butterfly SEED at the end of the series? Especially when he uses it dozens of times throughout the anime

8. Rhys knocks out Duval and Zowan in one of the last episodes to be able to hack SEED3 without them getting in her way (who said they would get in her way?) but to do that she had to get out of the cell. How exactly did Georg plan to get her out on his own?

9. Why did they have to put that shitty ending where Phil sends the request to Jacob on Pokemon Go after dying? Did they have to do the mysterious nonsense ending?

10. Rhys hesitates and gives up shooting Mary at the end (before being forced by Sapientia). But why was she emptying his magazines on her 1 minute before? And why does Jacob stand by and watch while she shoots Mary when he has all the time in the world and the cloak of speed to stop her?

11. Why does Jacob hide throughout the series that he knows Phil from his companions even in situations where it wouldn't cause any problems for anyone?

12. (One of those where I'm most doubtful I missed something) In the end, who was the mole in their team, that they mentioned in the episode of Inanna's illness? I don't think they've talked about it since then, as if it wasn't important anymore.

P.S. I am not a native English speaker, so I apologize for any mistakes