I'm going to divide this review into 4 sections
1. Story
The story is about a lady knight who's buffed up and does not think of herself as a woman or womanly. That is where our mmc comes in and confesses (in the very first chapter). She brushes her off but he is one persistent fella and tries his best to convey his feelings. He gets shot down but you can see that the Leo (the fmc) is flustered but does not initially reciprocate openly (this is one of the problems of the series and I'll explain in Progression). The story does have some elements of comedy especially when Mc's sister hangs out with Leo and Fooly (the Mc). The manga is set in a fantasy world with demons and different kind of monsters. The Mc is a mage whereas, the Fmc is a knight. That about summarizes the setting. The Mc has an abs fetish (bonus fact)
2. Art
If we talk about the art of the story then the art is nothing special. Its not too good nor is it too bad. The author really knows how to draw abs though. Although the art can be bland it does eventually get slightly better especially around the 90 chapter mark but the difference is little to none. Apart from that there is nothing to say about the art
3. Progression
In this section we'll talk about how the story progresses. This section might contain some spoilers. The story in the first 70 or so chapters is just random moments from the life of the Mc and Fmc without any direction. New characters are introduced and as you might have guessed, nearly every female character (literally 99% of characters are females) fall for the Mc. Personally I did not enjoy the first 90 or so chapters. I disliked how the knight kept on ignoring the feelings of the Mc while being extremely jealous. If you want him for yourself, make him yours before you complain. She would quite literally slash anyone that would act close with him. The Mc himself isn't that cautious either, as he quite literally touches abs of every single woman in the series with the exception of few. But he does seem to genuinely reject all other advances and truly loves the Fmc and her abs. I did like the comedy factor but the first 90 chapters were a pain to read with absolutely no romantic progression and the Mc having more intimate moments with other girls than the Fmc. I would say the story gets good after the tournament arc begins. The story finally feels as if its developing a direction and the characters are trying to sort their feelings. The only part i genuinely liked was after the tournament. Finally things began to speed up and we have actual content instead of daily moments in their life.
4. Characters
Leo
Leo is the Fmc and she has some nice abs. She is covered with scars and doesn't think she has that womanly appeal in the beginning. She does not reciprocate the Mc's feelings but they get close over time. She had an unbearable attitude in the first 90 chapters but the character change after a certain point of realization was dam
Fooly
The main character of the series. a guy with abs fetish (~~maybe i can relate?~~). Fooly loves Leo and is a very straightforward kind person.
Anri
Anri to me is definitely the best character (apart from being a brocon?). H/er comments towards the Fmc and Mc genuinely made me chuckle sometimes. That the reason why I like her.
Sarierla
A dark elf. Much more interesting than the Fmc honestly. Her teasing nature is nice ig.
Other characters exist too but I'm kinda tired so please read the series
I think the series was pretty bland the first 90 chapters (repeating this for the third time) Which is why its a below average series for me. I did like how things happened past the 90 chapter mark but the enjoyment was short lived. The first chapters are basically Mc gets in a situation with a girl and Fmc gets mad af but does not think of reciprocating his feelings. Then you see some decent fights and progression.
Chapters 1-90 55/100
chapters 90-131 71/100
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